The Doll Palace Home 
[Where Cartoon Dolls Live]

Dollz & Stories @ The Doll Palace

 Dollz & Stories Home
Every doll has a story behind...
Want to try to make one or see what other people came up with?! Every story will participate in The Doll Palace ratings. Good stories will be awarded with Dollpoints.
All created stories have to follow TDP Terms Of Use. We do not allow any sexually related material. The Doll Palace will be enforcing this rule and completely blocking access to the accounts that disregard our policy and create sexually oriented stories.
Hi, my name is Amlei
All stories about this doll
  
Poem 

Saddened

Show this story to your friends:
Story Rating   4.25  with 4 vote(s)
By my_boy_jet Send DollMailSend EmailICQAIMYIM
Created: 2006-09-09 21:02:43 All stories by my_boy_jet
As I walk around my home,

My mother asks everyday.

During my normal life,

My teachers look at me that way.

Strangers guess,

The poeple know.

I try to hide it,

but it always shows.

I can call opon it,

And make it swell.

I can try to forget it,

But that doesn't work well.

I cannot hide my sadness,

That forever grips my heart.

The sadness that controls me,

My life's biggest part.

content

As I walk around my home,

My mother asks everyday.

During my normal life,

My teachers look at me that way.

Strangers guess,

The poeple know.

I try to hide it,

but it always shows.

I can call opon it,

And make it swell.

I can try to forget it,

But that doesn't work well.

I cannot hide my sadness,

That forever grips my heart.

The sadness that controls me,

My life's biggest part.
  

Member Comments  
allie_2

23/Female
Australia
All My Stories
Posted On: September 10, 2006
Really good Jet!

♥ Allie ♥
LoveAnswer

20/Female
Bayport, NY
All My Stories
Posted On: September 9, 2006
Because, pegasas92, she needed more content to post the story, or tdp wouldn't have let her publish it.

***

I loved it, very good!

***

Please read my new (really new) series, The Girl Everyone Depends On.

*Tanya-
my_boy_jet

108/Female
Weston, MO
All My Stories
Posted On: September 9, 2006
Because it wasn't long enough to have tdp accept it.
pegasas92

24/Female
Italy
All My Stories
Posted On: September 9, 2006
It's ok, but why did you put content, then re-write the poem?
Please Sign-In to Post a Comment
© 2008 The Doll Palace. All rights reserved. Terms & Conditions   Privacy Statement   Advertise   Sitemap